#29193
    johndaroofa
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    @johndaroofa

    hey guys im new here my names john im 19 years old and here are my tattoos.
    please comment and leave feedback, i am looking to take my left arm to the wrist and would like some opinons of what people think of it and what could be added.
    thanx
    note all pix are taken in mirror
    http://img27.imageshack.us/my.php?image=000d052ix05.jpg
    http://img27.imageshack.us/my.php?image=000a052ix05.jpg
    http://img27.imageshack.us/my.php?image=000g052ix05.jpg
    http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0007052ix05.jpg

    #60487
    KnightHawk
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    @knighthawk

    I really like the heart, skull, wing thing, it’s pretty killer. The rest are well inked, and are solid, but nothing new. So, over all my man, not bad.

    Oh, for future reference, if you want to post pics from an outside website, just place the url between [/img ], subtracting the space between the final bracket in each case of course. Or, you could do it the lazy way (i.e. the way I usually use) and click the tool button that looks like a mountain and a sun on a yellow background. Paste your url into the box that pops up, and there ya go, pic is posted.

    Love. Peace. Metallica.

    #60603
    Izarrasink
    Participant
    @izarrasink

    Colour piece is very well done

    #60611
    Outlaw
    Participant
    @outlaw

    yep, i agree on the colour one as well

    #60613
    AnimalMyachi
    Participant
    @animalmyachi

    I dig the right arm piece. I’ve kind of ruined one of those for myself with the placement of my forearm tats, but I enjoy a big intricate design down the arm.

    #60624
    Sherav
    Participant
    @sherav

    Hi John

    Sorry in the delay of replying – I have been giving your tattoos some serious thought over last few days to see if I can suggest anything to add to them.

    I have some constructive criticisms (as you asked);

    The tribal – well executed from what I can see (could have done with closer for linework but looks solid enough).
    As it is a stand-alone piece I would suggest the following if you wanted to tinker with it.

    Give the edges a fresh outline to sharpen them, then maybe add some colour to the inner gaps.
    Alternatively if you wanted to keep it black and shade – add some shadowing to the edges or intersperse the gaps with some intricate line work.

    Nice piece of tribal design.

    Star and cobwebs

    Interesting piece in UK that would suggest that you had done time in prison but I realise that tats vary from culture to culture. (I still like the tattoo and think it makes a bold piece).

    To improve the tattoo I would suggest a tightening of linework on the star – looked a little wobbly. If you wanted to go colour I would suggest adding a centre piece to the star with some bold colour shading within the star to make it stand out. Perhaps a sugar skull or something that takes your fancy.

    If you went black n shade I would suggest maybe some inner shading and scripted text in the centre. Alternatively maybe something such as a nautical star or zodiac symbol – basically a centre piece to the star. I would also suggest a reshade of the outer web and have it more gradient in shadows.

    The stars are a bit far away to really comment but as a standard I would perhaps add a fresh outline and some colour tails or sparks to them. Maybe turn them into some shooting stars or add some flames to them. Hell a nice full dragon piece would go over that no prob! 😉

    The colour tat is beautiful and to mess with that would be like white washing the sistine chapel so leave it well alone.

    Nice ink and hope you don’t mind my feedback just trying to make a good tat a great one.

    Take Care
    Matthew

    #60824
    tattman91
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    @tattman91

    sorry dude i hope you realize that the southern cross is fucked… (wrong way around) un less this was suppose to be the way it is., id shoot the artist…

    the little star is meant to be inbetween the bottom and right star…
    good luck..

    #61331
    Christopher1
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    @christopher1

    Wow it very beautiful and looks very cool one,,,,,

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