It’s not my style, but the work looks okay.

A few wonky lines but as long as she likes it.

The key crashing into the dreamcatcher makes it look messy. Letters are bad. And for a tattoo this big it was too simple…really a waste of good space.
The only thing that would make this better is if you added more pictures of your sister.

@Gnarlymilk 127671 wrote:

Amok- I see what yer saying, I think part of the issue is the picture quality.

Thx for the replies !

I think that what you mean by saying that the issue is picture quality is that from right up close it looks ok as a shadow. But most people won’t have there nose mere inches from the tattoo. From 5 feet away it probably looks like it does in the picture – where the shading makes it looks like all the script has been blown. The drop shadow was a bad idea for that text.

I think this tattoo is ok. But it is on the lower end of ok.

If your sister is thrilled with it, that is what counts.

How would you have done it to make it not look messy? I thought it was pretty simple. Messy to me is like all over the place. I actually drew the drawing out haha and he shaped it up.

@peterpoose 127692 wrote:

For me personally it is a wasted nice piece of canvas with a boring and simple tattoo but if she likes it that’s all the matters 🙂

I will let you be the judge comparing which are nicer 🙂

I agree with you those designs are BEAUTIFUL! Wish I did more, but didn’t want a solid huge piece