#29627
    KeithC
    Participant
    @keithc

    Need some ideas to improve this peace ๐Ÿ™‚

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    #62864
    KnightHawk
    Participant
    @knighthawk

    Step One:

    Build a time machine. Refer to the nerdfighter website, I believe they’re running test trials on one at this very moment.

    Step Two:

    Travel back in time to about two days before you had your first session for that piece.

    Step Three:

    Shoot your tattoo artist in the head.

    Otherwise, I think you’re stuck with a crappy piece of ink.

    Love. Peace. Metallica.

    #62874
    Sherav
    Participant
    @sherav

    Hi

    Ok I will break down my suggestions into teh relevant parts of the tattoo as each bit needs it’s own touches.

    These are just constructive criticisms.

    Stars

    These could do with some reshaping and possibly a little more detail adding to them. Have you considered adding the clubs, hearts, spades, diamonds symbol to the centre as an extension of the deadman’s hand?

    Once you get these reworked will look a lot sharper.

    Playing Cards

    A fresh outline and possibly a burning effect on the edges would improve the shape, also a recolour to make the centre sparkle a bit more.

    Skull

    Add a new outline and rehade and mayb some more flesh tones and shading. also eitehr thicken the outline on the brim or colour it in black to make stand out more. I would also maybe add some fresh pupils.

    Blade

    The dagger/blade could do with some tighter lines and a reshade. I would possibly add some more white highlights to the pommel as well.

    Tribal

    This just needs a recolour and a fresh reline and it will be fine.

    Overall the tattoo is not bad it just needs some fine detail love.

    Take care
    Matthew

    #62877
    Joker1
    Participant
    @joker1
    KnightHawk;38407 wrote:
    Step One:

    Build a time machine. Refer to the nerdfighter website, I believe they’re running test trials on one at this very moment.

    Step Two:

    Travel back in time to about two days before you had your first session for that piece.

    Step Three:

    Shoot your tattoo artist in the head.

    Otherwise, I think you’re stuck with a crappy piece of ink.

    Love. Peace. Metallica.

    Fuck, I never get tired of reading this shit ๐Ÿ™‚

    #62879
    Sherav
    Participant
    @sherav

    Well I gotta say that KH is successfully dealing with his issues of holding back on what he thinks!

    Go KH!

    ๐Ÿ˜€

    Matthew

    #62887
    KnightHawk
    Participant
    @knighthawk

    I couldn’t do it without your unwavering support Matthew.

    MAN HUG!!!

    Love. Peace. Metallica.

    #62888
    Butterfly
    Participant
    @butterfly-2

    find a good artist to totally cover it up some how, looks like you had a friend do it

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