hi, i’m new to the forum and just wanted some opinions please, i have a sleeve at the moment which is unfinished, i’ve moved along way from where i lived before so will need to find a new artist, how could this be made better? originally i wanted biomechanical but think its not quiet there yet but has potential. i think there is still loads to do detail wise and i’d like to change some colour if i can, whats your thoughts?

many thanks