I’m not a fan of text tattoos either, but if you like it, get it. I know phoenix tattoos are frowned upon as a huge cliche, but I like the symbolism, the color possibilites, and the fact that it’s a design that can easily be free-handed by a skilled artist to fit the individual’s body – so one day I may get one.
Anyway, I think the quote is way too long, especially if you’re planning on getting it done horizontally. Perhaps it can be shortened like the one below? Or would that take too much away from it?