bad script choice and not clean. shakey lines and even with perfect lines it would still wouldnt look clean

hey man if you like it i cant take that away but if i was to ever produce something like that my boss would rip my head off. lets take for example the y in today. its haggard. or the s in sun. you can see the hesitation with the machine with that dot. my mentor always told me that with script there are fonts that no matter how clean you make them they will still look bad. this is one of those fonts. it also, in my opinion, was supposed to be cleaner lines and this is where the artist failed

This is pretty much what I was going to say. The shaky lines are what I was going to point out. I also just hate the script used.