Hi Dirtbike

If you want your name just don’t get it across your forehead 😉

As for making it better the font style is fine. What you have to consider is the shading and outline.
Where it is white do you just want skin showing? This could make it look unfinished.

I would suggest a bold outline to really make it stand out but have gradients of shading so that instead of just skin (white bits on the paper) it is a pale shade, deepening into a black fill.

Also I would recommend maybe changing the bottom underlining – to me it does not do the name justice. I would go for something more intricate, or swirling or maybe even something akin to an ivy trellis.

I would also suggest more shadowing around the letters – although this is something some go for some not.

Do a transfer slap it on your body and take a good look and see if you are really happy with it. Do not be afraid to experiment with the base design.

Take Care

Matthew

I agree about the J looking like a P

here is a quick one i done up, just puts a slight twist on it

i prefare it like this without the yellow and having a bit of shading around it

well hopefully i will be in norfolk area for a week in august, i am going to the first norwich convention, while up there i have been made welcome at the artists house who has just spent a week here with us lol….

but if your going towards the dover area then let me know matthew, im sure we can work something out.. 😉