im still wondering why you want the barbed wire, the barbed wire seems to hold no connection with the meaning of it.

the statement is strong enough on its own if done in a nice scriopt.. 😉

Hi

The idea concept is fine and any professional artist will be able to shape it better you just need to be able to relate the design to them.

My advice is to have the barb wire slightly more slender so that it can flow through O of non and maybe wrap a little around the edges of the letters before twisting away across your arm.

You could also have it slightly bloodied so it looks like it is penetrating the flesh or appearing from beneath the skin.

I am wondering what does the statement Acta Non Verba mean ? (I am an info collecting nut) 😀

Take Care
Matthew