The broken bottle of rum could be a great idea, is this staying as is or with color, I would do a few things in color and the rest in black pick particular things to color so it would stand out very well! Exp maybe the skull and cross bones on the hat or his bandanna:rolleyes: as for the women across the legs very good idea but I think in this picture it would be to much together, keep it simple for a great tat!

I agree with dentat2 that really would make it nice. There is so much going on in the picture that you need to take alot out because when you get a tattoo having to much going on in them doesnt make there beauty stand out, with a piece like that I would make sure you check around on your artist it has alot of detail and not all artist are great at doing fine detail!