While I really like the overall look of this design, I think that the proportions of the wings compared the body, as well as the overall shape kind of make this read as a lobster (like if you were to simplify the shape and just look at a silhouette). I think the tail is also a little short and wide and the overall action line is a little straight—it might be nice if it had some curve to it to make it feel more flexible. The linework is great and the concept works. I think that it just needs a few small tweaks to be perfect.