The idea is great to put to contrasting ideas into one picture: fire and water, calmness and anger. But when I look to the picture I do see this idea. Try somehow to show it more. Maybe make a fight between them? Bit overall I like it

They just delete them from database 🙂 or sell to somebody until nobody sees 😀

I will suggest changing the background color. Somehow it does not much to Chinese culture. Maybe something between red and black?

First tattoo is very import thing to choose. My suggestion is to be to fast with it. Just think about what you really want to see on your body. If you want text on your body you will have to fallow that text. It will be like your life motto. To check on the design there are a lot of pages on the internet. I used http://www.owntattoo.net/ and until now I am pretty happy about the work. Because I had time to choose (i did it at home) after I just print it and brought it to tattoo shop and he just tattooed it for me.

I would suggest you choosing something with lines, stripes or leaves. Lines and strips will keep attention out of the scarps on your stomach. Because they will be similar to them. Also it will good idea to choose colour tattoo. Good luck 