Posting that photo was a good exercise. I printed it out (and I am no artist !) and think there may be a way to rework it, both shoulders and sides of the neck. If the line is corrected on both sides, the existing lines may be more hair. The top of her right arm ( our view left) could be brought in a bit so its not as wide, then the green sash could be worked over that section of the arm. The rays could then be extended to the new lines of the shoulder.

I will put a photo of my (really badly sketched ) idea in my album.

What you think?

Thanks

Hi There,

Thanks for the response. Since the post I have been researching and found another artist who’s work is great and have met with him. I glad I did. I got some good advice and feel really confident now. I am going to let the current work fully heal (another month) before i see him. He could see the things that were concerning me in the work that was already done and assured me that he could achieve what a I am after.

I will post some before during and after pics. I dont want to do the wrong thing by the artist who has done the work so far, he is a great guy but I just dont think he can achieve what I need.

Anyway, I will keep you posted.